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Luke's TG: final!

As I got up the next day I picked up my phone to see if there where any messages, to my dissapointment there wasnt any.

I decided to make a quick bite to eat and place some flowers on my families grave before I go hang out with Julie and the others.

I made myself some Cereal and juice and ate them quickly and dashed washed and dressed myself and as I looked in to the mirror I was shocked to see that my hair had changed colour from dark brown to a really dark maroon colour, I decided not to dwell on it too much because I needed to go and thought that it was most likely the collar just getting use to my bodies chemistry.

As I left the room I bumped in to Julie, "oh hi there Louise good to see you back to being human again." Laughed Julie.

"oh hi there Julie, sorry I didnt see you". I replied

"so, where are you off to this early in the morning?" asked Julie

"I am just going back to my family grave to say a proper goodbye in a human form". I replied

"would like to come for a quick cup of tea first? Its just because I want to ask you a few questions about the collar and how you feel wearing it, if you dont mind that it." said Julie pulling out a clipboard from knowhere.

"umm... Ok why not". I said

We headed down to the local Cafe by the hotel and sat down with a cup of tea each, Julie then got her pen and started asking a lot of questions.

"So Louise how does the collar feel and do the changes make you feel unwell in any way?

I put down my cup of tea and replied "the collar feels fine, nine times out of ten I forget I am wearing it and no I dont feel any oddities in my body when wearing it."

Julie then jotted some notes and asked a few more questions.

After about 20 minutes of questioning she smiled and said "thank you for answering all them questions, I am going back to the hotel.

I waved her goodbye and went to the cemertary with a small bunch of blue roses.

I sat by the grave and said "hi guys sorry I didnt say my farewells properly but I am ready now, I am truely sorry for what I have caused and I hope you can forgive me. "

I then felt a hand on my shoulder and thought it was my family, I wiped my tears and turned to see not my family but a scientist, I froze in place when I saw the TGtech logo on his coat, he then thrusted a blade straight through my chest.

as I slowly fell to the ground he walked away and I started to black out.

I awoke on a field and I looked around but it was just an endless field, no tree's no building... no people except me, I looked down at my chest and saw a black chain sticking out of it and I said "my only regret is that I never said sorry to Natsuru..." I then got to my feet and just stood there as memories of my life flashed by in the sky.
hey guys so this is the last chapter in luke's TG I hope you all enjoyed the ride and I am truely sorry for the shit finale it is just that I lost all forms of motivation for this stroy and I didnt want it to just go stale without an ending.
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Jack-O-Lance Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting, but is this truly the final ending? (Or do you think you could do something else with it?)
LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Depends on whether someone wants to continue it from another prospective
Jack-O-Lance Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hmm.... not necessarily, where it was left off could be revived with the same character... Maybe you could do a vote: Revived vs  Afterlife vs Someone Else's Perspective?!
Therandomguy5 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
Hopefully that tgtech guy gets run over by a truck............repeatdly
LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Dont worry he got high fived in the face, with a frying pan, by the incredible hulk
Therandomguy5 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
Maxty941 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Wow the ending just wow. Felt like geting stabbed when I read that man. Can't say I did not see that one coming just I thought we would know if the cat thing would wear off...
dragon-god-7757 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Aw he.............she...........crap is dead and tgteck still lives that ducks :(

dragon-god-7757 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
Meant sucks. Stupid autocorect >:(

CaptianEquestria Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
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