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The contract part 15

As she got her training I noticed Masami had opened a portal to the room just next to me, "hey Louise can I talk to you for a minute please?" Said Masami as she opened a portal to hell, when we both walked through Masami started to ask me about an old ritual as old as time its self, as she explained it I kept hearing a faint cry for help behind her, "what was that?" I said looking down the corridor "N-nothing Louise! There is nothing down there now let's keep to the subject!" Snapped Masami, jumping in front of me, I took a step back and said to her "soo you want me to kill the ferryman to restore this order," Masami nodded and opened a portal instantly to the room where the ferryman was in, he was just sitting at his desk writing some more souls to be collected,

as I went to hit the ferryman with the scythe he clasped the blade with his hand and said "my, my Louise what are you trying to do?" he then pushed back at my scythe and launched me across the room, Masami just sat on top of the table grinning like a mad man, "go on Louise kill him you can do it." said Masami in a less noticeable voice. As I got up I noticed this change in her voice and stopped the ferryman from attacking me "wait, wait, didn't you notice something up with Masami's voice?" I said holding my hands out and turning my scythe back in to the cross on my bracelet. The ferryman stopped and turned to Masami who was now looking more angry that I had stopped fighting, "Louise you need to kill him so I can start my cycle again!!" shouted Masami stomping towards me, "there is a small problem about that Masami, the ferryman is an absolute being, he cannot be destroyed, sort of like you and the big man-" I was interrupted by Masami who had now clasped her hand around my neck, "YOU WILL KILL THE FERRYMAN OR I WILL KILL YOU AND HAVE YOU LIKE RENN, IN CHAINS IN HEL-" Masami screamed furiously as she was interrupted by a deep young voice

"Masami, let Louise go now!!" said the strange young man who held a boned scythe. "God this doesn't concern you!!" replied Masami as she flung me across the room almost knocking me out as I hit the wall, "your trying to get innocent reapers to do your work! It has become my business now demon and you will be destroyed!!" Said God as he swung his scythe directly to Masami's throat, this made contact and caused her to go to the floor and knocked her out instantly, after a few seconds of staring at her God walked up to me and said "are you ok Louise?" Said God holding his hand out to help me up, "y-yeah I am fine just didn't expect Masami to go evil on me so suddenly." I said as I got to my feet.

God then turned back to where Masami was and said "Masami is possessed by a greater demon" I paused and said "a greater demon, have a fought one yet?" god then turned back to me and shook his head and said "no Louise we wouldn't allow new reapers to fight such powerful things, you may know Tertius Gradus but these creatures could kill you easily even in this form, only the ferryman, Masami and I are powerful enough to kill them". I stood there and noticed that Masami was getting up I tried to help God by binding her in the soul chains but this was pointless, as I tried to bind her arms and legs the chains deflected and dispersed in the air, "oh crap, how are we going to kill it God?" I said as I slowly backed away "we?" said god as he grabbed my left arm holding me in my position. "Louise I will show you a final form that only me and the ferryman have mastered, if you can get in to this form you will be immortalised.
Hey guys sorry this one is so shot and has been a while to upload I have sort of been lacking in motivation at the moment with my job sapping all my energy out of me, but I will try and get more episodes out as soon as possible
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Therandomguy5 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Um sorry but i think satan would be above a demon
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LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
she may be Satan but that wouldnt stop a greater demon from possessing her if her guard was down
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Therandomguy5 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
Fine still seems a bit ilogical though
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aceefire1234 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
why did you use the undertaker from black butler as the picture?
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LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It best described ths character for me
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C10artfan Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2012  Hobbyist
I can kind of imagine my character doing this, he's been brought back to life and brought back from non-existance multiple times, he would have a debt of about 100000 souls subtracting the ones he has (unintentionaly) sent to the afterlife.
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NanoCarp0 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I only have one complaint about this story. One and only one.

Ever heard of the phrase "Mary Sue"? It indicates when the main character is so overwhelmingly powerful that the story becomes boring, and the reader is no longer engaged because they can predict that the main character will always be victorious.

I definitely see attempts to avoid this, but it still isn't quite engaging enough. I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here!
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LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok thank you very much for the comment I will aim to adjust this and not make it dull.
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potsticker13 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Love it!
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LittleMissTG Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awesome ^^ glad you love it
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